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author | Niklas Hallqvist <niklas@cvs.openbsd.org> | 1998-04-08 23:49:37 +0000 |
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committer | Niklas Hallqvist <niklas@cvs.openbsd.org> | 1998-04-08 23:49:37 +0000 |
commit | ba1142f0e75d8499726db9cc646655a1b51eb927 (patch) | |
tree | 6d165de0047ace4d94ff9cd315d8da64231af520 | |
parent | 9b0410519fb6569bc60710e9aa592acce87741f4 (diff) |
spelling and grammer & clarfication; marc espie
-rw-r--r-- | distrib/notes/amiga/contents | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | distrib/notes/amiga/hardware | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | distrib/notes/amiga/install | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | distrib/notes/amiga/prep | 4 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | distrib/notes/amiga/upgrade | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | distrib/notes/amiga/xfer | 12 |
6 files changed, 12 insertions, 12 deletions
diff --git a/distrib/notes/amiga/contents b/distrib/notes/amiga/contents index 81183d73087..6a7e8281029 100644 --- a/distrib/notes/amiga/contents +++ b/distrib/notes/amiga/contents @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Installation/upgrade miniroot file system: then mounting your root and /usr partitions and getting ready to extract (and possibly first fetching) the distribution sets. There is enough on this file system to allow you to - make a slip or ppp connection, configure an ethernet, mount an + make a slip or ppp connection, configure an Ethernet, mount an NFS file system or ftp. You can also load distribution sets from a SCSI tape or from one of your existing AmigaDOS partitions. diff --git a/distrib/notes/amiga/hardware b/distrib/notes/amiga/hardware index 9e658a21247..994e7452adc 100644 --- a/distrib/notes/amiga/hardware +++ b/distrib/notes/amiga/hardware @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ Supported devices include: GVP Spectrum. Piccolo. A2410. - Cybervision 64. + Cybervision 64. (Not Cybervision 64/3D) oMnibus. Domino. Merlin. diff --git a/distrib/notes/amiga/install b/distrib/notes/amiga/install index 76b4a492c06..d136fc638ee 100644 --- a/distrib/notes/amiga/install +++ b/distrib/notes/amiga/install @@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ begin again from scratch. link0 -link1 Use AUI port link0 link1 Use UTP (twisted pair) port - After all network interfaces has been configured the install pro- + After all network interfaces have been configured the install pro- gram will ask for a default route and IP address of the primary name server to use. You will also be presented with an opportunity to edit the host table. diff --git a/distrib/notes/amiga/prep b/distrib/notes/amiga/prep index d3bdbb9b075..938ddf6f9bf 100644 --- a/distrib/notes/amiga/prep +++ b/distrib/notes/amiga/prep @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Preparing you hard disk with HDToolBox: up here you could lose everything on all the drives that you configure. It is therefore advised that you: - Write down your current configurations. Do this + Write down your current configuration. Do this by examining each partition on the drive and the drives parameters (from Change drive type.) @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ Choosing installation root filesystem type: The OpenBSD/amiga operating system can be installed using two different root filesystems: ramdisk or miniroot. The ramdisk - is strongly recommended as it requires less preparation work. + is strongly recommended as it requires less preparatory work. However the ramdisk kernel requires that your system has at least 6MB of fastmem. The miniroot requires less (installs on a 4MB system should be possible) and has tools to make SLIP or diff --git a/distrib/notes/amiga/upgrade b/distrib/notes/amiga/upgrade index a10781ca51e..ee8a38d07db 100644 --- a/distrib/notes/amiga/upgrade +++ b/distrib/notes/amiga/upgrade @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ To upgrade your system, follow the following instructions: However, if you hit it at an inopportune moment, your system may be left in an inconsistent (and possibly unusable) state. - The upgrade program will then chack & mount your root filesystem + The upgrade program will then check & mount your root filesystem under /mnt and grab some configuration info from it for the continued upgrade process. You'll be asked if the network should be enabled at this point. After that is done the rest diff --git a/distrib/notes/amiga/xfer b/distrib/notes/amiga/xfer index 5c83349698d..a764d2e6508 100644 --- a/distrib/notes/amiga/xfer +++ b/distrib/notes/amiga/xfer @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ Installation is supported from several media types, including: - AmigaDOS partitions - FFS partitions + AmigaDOS Fast file system partitions + Berkeley FFS partitions Tape Remote NFS partition FTP @@ -30,10 +30,10 @@ To prepare for installing via an AmigaDOS partition: To install OpenBSD from an AmigaDOS partition, you need to get the OpenBSD distribution sets you wish to install - on your system on to an AmigaDOS partition. All of the - set_name.tar.gz pieces can be placed in a single directory - instead of separate ones for each distribution set. This - will also simplify the installation work later on. + on your system on to an AmigaDOS fast file system partition. + All of the set_name.tar.gz pieces can be placed in a single + directory instead of separate ones for each distribution set. + This will also simplify the installation work later on. Note where you place the files, you will need this later. Also, it might be a good idea to type down the AmigaDOS |