From f0a303c104f977553b4f2c4c58cba4bd3a3a023c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Paul Janzen <pjanzen@cvs.openbsd.org>
Date: Thu, 21 Dec 2000 04:53:37 +0000
Subject: grammar and accuracy

---
 games/trek/USD.doc/trek.me | 44 ++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------
 1 file changed, 22 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)

(limited to 'games/trek')

diff --git a/games/trek/USD.doc/trek.me b/games/trek/USD.doc/trek.me
index 80f8b3a4ef8..cb25b04bdce 100644
--- a/games/trek/USD.doc/trek.me
+++ b/games/trek/USD.doc/trek.me
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"	$OpenBSD: trek.me,v 1.2 1999/03/12 03:03:04 pjanzen Exp $
+.\"	$OpenBSD: trek.me,v 1.3 2000/12/21 04:53:36 pjanzen Exp $
 .\"	$NetBSD: trek.me,v 1.2 1995/04/22 10:59:49 cgd Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 1980, 1993
@@ -268,17 +268,17 @@ Consumes: nothing
 .pp
 The short range scan
 gives you a picture
-of the quadrant you are in,
-and (if you say "yes")
-a status report
-which tells you
-a whole bunch
-of interesting stuff.
-You can get a status report alone
-by using the
-.ul
-status
-command.
+of the quadrant you are in.
+.\"and (if you say "yes")
+.\"a status report
+.\"which tells you
+.\"a whole bunch
+.\"of interesting stuff.
+.\"You can get a status report alone
+.\"by using the
+.\".ul
+.\"status
+.\"command.
 An example follows:
 .sp
 .in +4
@@ -381,7 +381,7 @@ Klingons Left -- Guess.
 Time Left -- How long the Federation can hold out
 if you sit on your fat ass and do nothing.
 If you kill Klingons quickly,
-this number goes up,
+this number goes up;
 otherwise,
 it goes down.
 If it hits zero,
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ or something equally unpleasant.
 .qq
 Current Crew -- The number of crew members
 left.
-This figures does not include officers.
+This figure does not include officers.
 .qq
 Brig Space -- The space left in your brig
 for Klingon captives.
@@ -470,12 +470,12 @@ tell the number of objects
 in the quadrants.
 The units digit tells the number of stars,
 the tens digit the number of starbases,
-and the hundreds digit is the number of Klingons.
+and the hundreds digit the number of Klingons.
 "*" indicates the negative energy barrier
 at the edge of the galaxy,
 which you cannot enter.
-"///" means that that is a supernova quadrant
-and must not be entered.
+"///" denotes a supernova quadrant,
+which must not be entered.
 .bl "Damage Report"
 Mnemonic: damages
 Shortest Abbreviation: da
@@ -549,7 +549,7 @@ after which it becomes the base for navigation.
 If damaged,
 navigation becomes inaccurate.
 When it is fixed,
-Spock recalibrates it,
+Spock recalibrates it;
 however,
 it cannot be calibrated extremely accurately
 until you dock at starbase.
@@ -609,7 +609,7 @@ Klingons cannot see you,
 and hence they do not fire at you.
 They are useful for entering
 a quadrant
-and selecting a good position,
+and selecting a good position;
 however,
 weapons cannot be fired through
 the cloak
@@ -673,7 +673,7 @@ Torpedoes are projectile weapons -- there are no partial hits.
 You either hit your target or you don't.
 A hit on a Klingon destroys him.
 A hit on a starbase destroys that starbase
-(woops!).
+(whoops!).
 Hitting a star usually causes it to go nova,
 and occasionally supernova.
 .pp
@@ -855,8 +855,8 @@ The officers escape the Enterprise in the shuttlecraft.
 If the transporter is working
 and there is an inhabitable starsystem
 in the area,
-the crew beams down,
-otherwise you leave them to die.
+the crew beams down;
+otherwise, you leave them to die.
 You are given an old but still usable ship,
 the Faire Queene.
 .bl "Ram"
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