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authorIngo Schwarze <schwarze@cvs.openbsd.org>2011-01-30 15:37:18 +0000
committerIngo Schwarze <schwarze@cvs.openbsd.org>2011-01-30 15:37:18 +0000
commit110382a22b114cad0f9431e25d6699be6f8b4f74 (patch)
tree774ab08d932414a3e93df3089eafe223276a70ba
parent6d97aa3005392ec2d7658a6711401d97e1ae0476 (diff)
As reminded by deraadt@, we don't usually use "you" in manuals, so use
a bit less of it here, even though this page is a bit special. Not a full sweep of the page, just cleaning up the paragraph we recently touched. ok jmc@ lum@
-rw-r--r--share/man/man8/afterboot.815
1 files changed, 8 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/share/man/man8/afterboot.8 b/share/man/man8/afterboot.8
index b2c46be3a09..25f876d9693 100644
--- a/share/man/man8/afterboot.8
+++ b/share/man/man8/afterboot.8
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\" $OpenBSD: afterboot.8,v 1.131 2011/01/29 08:49:17 lum Exp $
+.\" $OpenBSD: afterboot.8,v 1.132 2011/01/30 15:37:17 schwarze Exp $
.\"
.\" Copyright (c) 1997 Marshall M. Midden
.\" All rights reserved.
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
.\" (INCLUDING NEGLIGENCE OR OTHERWISE) ARISING IN ANY WAY OUT OF THE USE OF
.\" THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE.
.\"
-.Dd $Mdocdate: January 29 2011 $
+.Dd $Mdocdate: January 30 2011 $
.Dt AFTERBOOT 8
.\" Originally created by Marshall M. Midden -- 1997-10-20, m4@umn.edu
.Os
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ By the time that you have installed your system, it is quite likely that
bugs in the release have been found.
Any security or reliability fixes can be found at
.Pa http://www.openbsd.org/errata.html .
-It is recommended that you check this page regularly.
+It is recommended to check this page regularly.
.Ss Login
Log in on the console, or over the network using
.Xr ssh 1 .
@@ -80,16 +80,17 @@ group, then use the
and
.Xr sudo 8
commands when root privileges are required.
-During the installation you were given the option to set up a user account.
+.Pp
+The installation process provides an option to set up a user account.
By default, accounts created via this method are automatically added to
the
.Dq wheel
group.
-If you did not use this option see the paragraph
+If that option was not used, see the paragraph
.Sx Add new users
-below for details.
+below.
.Pp
-If you wish to deny root logins over the network, edit the
+To deny root logins over the network, edit the
.Pa /etc/ssh/sshd_config
file and set
.Cm PermitRootLogin